Thoughtful work here Kristy. You have started to analyse the nuances of the question, basing this discussion on a character analysis - a good way of doing it. Ponder the texts now, in light of these characters, so that your essay can explore the texts to prove these ideas. Aim to let each new paragraph progress your response to the question. Try to avoid the feeling that you make a list of characters who face choices.
Thoughtful work here Kristy. You have started to analyse the nuances of the question, basing this discussion on a character analysis - a good way of doing it. Ponder the texts now, in light of these characters, so that your essay can explore the texts to prove these ideas. Aim to let each new paragraph progress your response to the question. Try to avoid the feeling that you make a list of characters who face choices.
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